Thursday, September 28, 2006

Something and the somethings - Page 13

The idea was that I was going to change the name of the Last-Minuters at, er, the last minute. I guess I was a little fed up with the logo or *something*. Anyway, I previewed my alternative title (The Zeros, or Alice and the Zeros) and, well... feedback not so good. So I've had a think about it and I might go back to the old title, with a new logo. Yes, I *am* exciting. How did you guess?

Anyway, have a look at groovy funky page 13!

Feedback very welcome guys!

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12 Comments:

Blogger SRH said...

Beautiful premise.

5:24 PM  
Blogger Dan McDaid said...

Thanks a lot Scott! Hopefully this is going to go somewhere funny and exciting.

That it for the comments? Wow, quiet week on the internet...!

5:47 AM  
Blogger Iananan said...

i liked the last minuters!

still, brilliant all round

8:51 AM  
Blogger J. R. Pickthall said...

Word up G! :)

I think your at the stage where you want to feel a the certain 'freshness'/novelty again with it and thats why I think your wanna change the name and start thinking TOO much about it all.

I know this feeling with LG. I think you're doing the right thing by trying to pitch it. Personally I'd get it to a stage then break for a month or couple of weeks. I know the 'fans' will lynch me for saying it :) and i'm not saying it cos its decreased in quality ( on the contrary )but you just may not be able to see the wood for the trees at the minute.

3:07 PM  
Blogger Dan McDaid said...

Iananan - I like Junior Senior! Hooray! (and it's probably going to go back to The Last-Minuters as of my next post).

JP - 'sup dog? You're dead right about the name change, and I'm probably changing it back for those very reasons. I just felt it needed freshening up or something. I'm very tempted to take a break actually (for a variety of reasons, not least of which that I'm moving house), but it's nice to get a page a week out there and know I can stick to some kind of schedule. Also, the fans... What can you do? :)

2:15 AM  
Blogger Mr Spink said...

Like the new look, big fella. The ink makes it look more polished — something that was missing from using the pens. Keep the original title! I'm going to have to start reading this from a story point of view, instead of a “technical” one — maybe when it's all finished. (-:

3:43 AM  
Anonymous "a lone serpent" said...

Lookin' good Dan. It really looks like you are settling into it. I can sense a rapidity and flow now. Be careful or it will become second nature to you :)

9:14 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Love the clarity of this and the layout, Dan - each frame so different and strong in itself. Seeing Mr Stone just in profile and shaded in frame 4 was both striking and dramatic, as was the close-up of him in frame 5.
I`m so fond of Alison already but I`m intrigued and strangely fascinated by Mr Stone, too.
I can`t believe how far we`ve travelled in this story already - and it all keeps getting better and better.
You really are the Master, in complete control here.
Excellent! BJ

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