The Last-Minuters!: THE LAST-MINUTERS: Part 1, Page 1

Sunday, July 02, 2006

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Jay said...: Im running low on superlatives here, this is lighter on the eye candy but its a very well staged scene and I'm engaged in it already and you know im not a graphic novel kinda guy - cool pay off at the end; 4:35 PM
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Dan McDaid said...: Jay, thanks for that. Incisive feedback as always: I was also pretty pleased with the staging here, and yeah it's definitely a quieter moment.

Peach - I'm glad you think so! She worked out prettier than I had planned, but I still think it kinda works.; 3:05 AM
Dan McDaid said...: Wow, I'm really glad you see that Miss McC. This seemed like the smartest way to go: really wanted the story to hit the ground running, but I also needed to get as many character beats in there as possible. I think we get a good sense of what Sky-Knight is like here, and a hint of where Alison is going. Cheers!; 4:18 AM
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Dan McDaid said...: Circle what-now?
Ignore the curmudgeon! Please continue to administer the jerking!; 4:33 AM
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