Sunday, July 02, 2006

THE LAST-MINUTERS: Part 1, Page 1



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9 Comments:

Blogger J. R. Pickthall said...

Im running low on superlatives here, this is lighter on the eye candy but its a very well staged scene and I'm engaged in it already and you know im not a graphic novel kinda guy - cool pay off at the end

4:35 PM  
Blogger Peach said...

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1:14 AM  
Blogger Dan McDaid said...

Jay, thanks for that. Incisive feedback as always: I was also pretty pleased with the staging here, and yeah it's definitely a quieter moment.

Peach - I'm glad you think so! She worked out prettier than I had planned, but I still think it kinda works.

3:05 AM  
Blogger Miss McC said...

Really inventive way to start the story - action *and* character introduction/development all at once. Clever.

3:33 AM  
Blogger Dan McDaid said...

Wow, I'm really glad you see that Miss McC. This seemed like the smartest way to go: really wanted the story to hit the ground running, but I also needed to get as many character beats in there as possible. I think we get a good sense of what Sky-Knight is like here, and a hint of where Alison is going. Cheers!

4:18 AM  
Blogger Peach said...

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4:25 AM  
Blogger Dan McDaid said...

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4:29 AM  
Blogger Dan McDaid said...

Circle what-now?
Ignore the curmudgeon! Please continue to administer the jerking!

4:33 AM  
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4:36 AM  

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